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Stabbed in the chest.
Throat cut deep and wide.
Wrists bleeding out in puddles.
Light changes in my fogged and teary eyes.

The beating of my heart pounds against impossibility.
Breathing slows to a rasping whisper.
Arms going numb with blissful pain.
Red blurs my vision of the world.

The final pounding beat of a faint heart.
The last breath of a slipping soul.
Limp limbs find their resting places in pools of red.
Darkness takes over once and for all.
How i feel. Kinda what I wish was going on with me right now. but also not. It's... It's hard to explain....
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:icontwlohasupporter:
TWLOHASupporter Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know exactly how you feel :hug: hang in there, if you need anything message me.
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Candy42 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
I know exactly how you feel. Sort of what I want right now but not.
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AnonymousPoetGirl Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
This is really good. :D And you don't have to explain, I know how you feel. <3
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DyskoDelThunderback Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
I'm sorry...
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TheHardRockPolak Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
its emotional bloody and good like usual. Hugs to make you feel better *huugs*
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Gowiththaflo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow......gave me goosebumps..... *hugs* wish I could help you ~
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