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Look up from your desk.
Look up from your book.
Look up from your laptop
                        or cellphone
                        or iPod and songs.

Why can't you see me?
Why don't you care?
Why won't you answer my letters?
                        wishes?
                        calls?

Do you even know my name?
Do you even recognize my face?
Do you even think of my eyes?
                        my nose?
                        my smile?

How long must I wait for you to see me?
How long till you know the love in my heart?
How long till I can call you my own?
                        my love?
                        my dear?

I hope that time will come soon.
I hope you think of me even once in your life.
I hope some day you'll look at me.
                        see me.
                        notice me.
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just an old poem of mine. hope that the guy i had a crush on might not look through me, might some day want me. i found it looking through some old notebooks.
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=lucyfire71 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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very touching poem!
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Mood: Love ~aJulia Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good, and easy to relate to. Keep it up :)
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Mood: Love ~J-AxT13 Aug 27, 2012   General Artist
OMGolly!!! Thank you so much! I haven't noticed my pet rock for months...I hope he doesn't feel ignored...I better feed him now...
Love the poem by the way
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Omg i :heart: this so much! :D very good job :glomp:
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~0L50NJ4 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My gosh this is good, and can be applied so so many situations.
;-)
thanks for posting it here.
:-)
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I hope sempai notices me today.
No but seriously, this evoked some serious feels-memories.
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Mood: Neutral ~AbyssWolf666 Aug 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I've been in this same boat and i came to realize that anybody worth looking at is easily visible, for their acts in the world fill them and make it impossible to not be seen, and waiting for things to just fall into place is like filling a clear space with air. I don't know about you but i would fill that space with soil and grow a garden so beautiful and diverse that you can't help but notice it.
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~DaemonVayne Aug 26, 2012  Student Photographer
this has potential to be a song
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beautiful and very relevant to most of us :)
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